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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:18 pm

Use imageshack sir.
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Yeah, did that hastily, but looks cool when it's fast.
Not the best animating, but eased. =D
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:30 pm



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I think he get's too carried away with the story and not on the "smoothness," or transitions.

Discuss.

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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:26 am

Woah, that's long... sometimes it's too fast for me to understand what's happening... fun to watch though. Yes, his smoothness does need a lot of improvement though, but when it is improved, it would be awesome.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:38 pm

It just doesn't look like normal movement.
If he made all those extra figures himself..gratz...
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Ok, made a guy practicing, it's also a loop. =D

And the reason he's flying backwards is because there's an imaginary wall.
Also pretty nicely eased and snapping kick.
But lazy with upper body. Oh well.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:15 pm

All of the figures came from a site known as Droidz.org
They host user made figures and such.

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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:46 pm

ALL of them?
Well, I took a closer look, and the walking is..mediocre.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:15 pm

On yours? or my brothers?

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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:42 pm

Your brother's.

A 3d kick, or a downkick.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:30 pm

Ever tried slow motion effects?

Make the objects bUlGe as they move. Edit the size each frame so it looks like it grows and shrinks.

You can also do something like super speed. Your character starts running. He picks up speed. You change the color from black to grey as he gets faster. And he keeps running. Then he slows. And slowly changes back to black.

Also, Slow motion also works if you sort of "mirror" the character right behind him. So make the character black, and the mirror image a lighter shade, make the mirroring character sort of "echo," or mimic the main characters movements one step behind.

If you want i can show you.

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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:15 pm

I prefer realisticness.
Improved the last kick. More forward motion.
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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:02 pm

I noticed that he sort of pauses at a few spots...

I might have to show you some of the effects. Its actually kind of neat.

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PostSubject: Re: Short Story.   Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:26 pm

Wait, need to fix that too.
Yeah, show me something.
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