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MrStraw1234 Senior Member
Posts : 82 Credits : 119 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 31 Location : Virginia
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:18 pm | |
| Use imageshack sir. Example: Uploaded with ImageShack.usYeah, did that hastily, but looks cool when it's fast. Not the best animating, but eased. =D | |
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8thkill Global Moderator
Posts : 270 Credits : 338 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 29 Location : Western Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:30 pm | |
| Uploaded with ImageShack.usI think he get's too carried away with the story and not on the "smoothness," or transitions. Discuss. | |
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Pancake101 Junior Member
Posts : 43 Credits : 48 Join date : 2010-09-27 Age : 113
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:26 am | |
| Woah, that's long... sometimes it's too fast for me to understand what's happening... fun to watch though. Yes, his smoothness does need a lot of improvement though, but when it is improved, it would be awesome. | |
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MrStraw1234 Senior Member
Posts : 82 Credits : 119 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 31 Location : Virginia
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:38 pm | |
| It just doesn't look like normal movement. If he made all those extra figures himself..gratz... Edit. Ok, made a guy practicing, it's also a loop. =D And the reason he's flying backwards is because there's an imaginary wall. Also pretty nicely eased and snapping kick. But lazy with upper body. Oh well. | |
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8thkill Global Moderator
Posts : 270 Credits : 338 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 29 Location : Western Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:15 pm | |
| All of the figures came from a site known as Droidz.org They host user made figures and such. | |
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MrStraw1234 Senior Member
Posts : 82 Credits : 119 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 31 Location : Virginia
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:46 pm | |
| ALL of them? Well, I took a closer look, and the walking is..mediocre. | |
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8thkill Global Moderator
Posts : 270 Credits : 338 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 29 Location : Western Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:15 pm | |
| On yours? or my brothers? | |
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MrStraw1234 Senior Member
Posts : 82 Credits : 119 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 31 Location : Virginia
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:42 pm | |
| Your brother's. A 3d kick, or a downkick. | |
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8thkill Global Moderator
Posts : 270 Credits : 338 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 29 Location : Western Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Wed Sep 29, 2010 7:30 pm | |
| Ever tried slow motion effects?
Make the objects bUlGe as they move. Edit the size each frame so it looks like it grows and shrinks.
You can also do something like super speed. Your character starts running. He picks up speed. You change the color from black to grey as he gets faster. And he keeps running. Then he slows. And slowly changes back to black.
Also, Slow motion also works if you sort of "mirror" the character right behind him. So make the character black, and the mirror image a lighter shade, make the mirroring character sort of "echo," or mimic the main characters movements one step behind.
If you want i can show you. | |
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MrStraw1234 Senior Member
Posts : 82 Credits : 119 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 31 Location : Virginia
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:15 pm | |
| I prefer realisticness. Improved the last kick. More forward motion. | |
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8thkill Global Moderator
Posts : 270 Credits : 338 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 29 Location : Western Pennsylvania
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:02 pm | |
| I noticed that he sort of pauses at a few spots...
I might have to show you some of the effects. Its actually kind of neat. | |
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MrStraw1234 Senior Member
Posts : 82 Credits : 119 Join date : 2010-09-04 Age : 31 Location : Virginia
| Subject: Re: Short Story. Fri Oct 01, 2010 11:26 pm | |
| Wait, need to fix that too. Yeah, show me something. | |
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